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Porcelain doll with tangled hair,
People pass or stop and stare,
Her cotton clothes are ripped and torn,
Her parents regret the day she was born,
Her plastic heart has melted down,
Her stunning smile, a perfect frown,
Her shining future, a blackened road,
Her flowing words, a fucked up code.

Once glowing eyes, now dark and dead,
And voices scream inside her head,
A falling rain of acid tears,
Mirrors reflecting all her fears,
A fire raging through her veins,
Drugs to reduce all her pains,
Her porcelain skin, now scarred and bruised,
Her staggering beauty, now gone and used.

A foreign beauty, now buried alone,
A cryptic place where light once shown,
Once graceful flight with song and dance,
A life of hope and true romance,
Now blundering falls and morbid display,
Where crystal tears fall every day,
A heartless place of death and disease,
Where evil comes and goes with ease.

Porcelain doll with tangled hair,
Shattered dreams and timeless despair,
A radiant star, now void black hole,
Trying to replace what innocence stole,
Now in her hand, a bloody knife,
Now in her mind, an ended life,
A porcelain doll, a murdered youth,
Her hopeless fight, a deadly truth.
©2004-2009 ~deadlypoison695
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Submitted: May 26, 2004
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i was reading a lot of poems lately and just got inspired to write... i can tell you that a lot of you who read this (and are on my devwatch) will recognise a similar theme to one of your poems...

EDIT: NEW LOVELY PREVIEW! Created by my sister
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all i have to say is that youre probably my favourite poet...out of all the ones that exist
its beautiful
This is great writing, I love the rhyming and the message :+fav::clap:

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"I love this job more than i love taffy. And I'm a man who enjoys his taffy."-Adam West.

"They're midgets, filthy drug-peddling midgets!"-Seth McFarlane
Wonderful poem, it flows very well and the imagery is excellent.

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Who died and made you Keats? You get a cookie if you figure out the joke!

Moving to a new city!
thanks... that means a lot to me... :hug:

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
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Wow, it is incredible... :+favlove:

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What was left now is right
What was up now is down
What I once knew, I know no more
:rose: :blackrose: :heart:
thanks... i'm glad you liked it... :D

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
:D thanks... though i will admit that i had to use a thesaurus to rhyme most of those :hmm:

and thx for the fav!

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
:D thank ye...

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
no problerm. I love your poems

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What was left now is right
What was up now is down
What I once knew, I know no more
:rose: :blackrose: :heart:
:) i love that u love them :)

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:

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