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Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I want to see,
a world untouched,
un-harmed by love,
a world not cursed,
that soars above,
a world of warmth,
not cold as ice,
a world where hearts break once,
not twice.

Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I wish to see,
a moonlit night,
not pouring rain,
tears cried for joy,
not cried for pain,
a peaceful life,
a brand-new slate,
a world where love
can't turn to hate.

Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I hope to see,
a world where pain
cannot occur,
where tears don't make
my vision blur,
where happiness
can't drag me down,
and love won't try
to make me drown.

Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I pray to see,
a place where I
won't need to feel,
where time and life
are not so real,
a place where I
don't need to think,
where into death
I'll never sink.

Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I know can't be,
a world where death
is not a choice,
a place where I
can't hear his voice,
a world where cuts
don't bleed or scar,
where I can watch
life from afar,
a world where I
can hide away,
to die again
another day.

Now Mirror, Mirror,
lie to me
and show me what
I need to see
reflect a world
unlike my own
where what is real
is never known.
©2004-2009 ~deadlypoison695
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I wrote this poem hoping for a lie that would cover up the truth of a horrible relationship. My mirror kind-of inspired me for some reason.
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this is good, it has a nice rhyme scheme and the repetition works very well.

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"I love this job more than i love taffy. And I'm a man who enjoys his taffy."-Adam West.
:tears: Poor baby. I love the poem, it's so great, but very depressing!! You need a hug. :glomp:

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Comment to get comments,
Love to get love,
Live to get hurt.

I sit here crying
The tears stream from my eyes
There always was that sadness
That came with the good-byes

Diane and Rachel ~Married since November 19, 2003!
im glad that you like it
aww, i feel like that all the time:cries: well, good usage of words:clap: it flowed nice and smoothly and very impacting:clap:

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:D thanks! and if you ever need a hug... come and find me :hug:

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
aww, hug buddy eh :aww: well surely i'll be coming along the mountain when uhh i come for a glomp..?

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hehe... yes... hug buddy... :hug:

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
yay!! I found me self a hug buddy!:boggie:
hehhe ^^; :hug:

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:hug: YAY! :glomp: ... hehe... sry... a bit overenthusiastic there... :aww:

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
hahahXD ish okay I would done the same thing also haha or worst ^^;

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