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Forever, have I lost you?
You池e fading from my sight.
Can you not see we池e falling?
We池e dying in the night.
My heart is yours, Forever,
I値l never turn away.
I値l wait for you to find me.
I値l try to make you stay.

You promised me, Forever,
To make our hearts as one.
Did you forget, Forever,
To tell me we were done?
Forever, will you hold me,
And sooth my heart to sleep?
Tell me again, Forever,
That I知 the one you値l keep.

My heart will beat, Forever,
Until you bid it rest.
I値l live for you, Forever.
I値l try to pass this test.
Forever, I feel empty,
My heart has told a lie.
Forever, can you promise
That you won稚 start to cry?

This wound will bleed, Forever,
But pain is worth the prize.
I値l sing for you, Forever,
An angel for your eyes.
I知 leaving you, Forever,
But, Forever, I will wait.
I promise that I値l meet you
At heaven痴 golden gate.

Forever, I will hold you,
I値l never let you go.
Forever, I will love you,
Though you may never know.
I want to stay, Forever,
But God has called me home.
My soul will stay, Forever,
And follow where you roam.

My death may hurt, Forever,
But know it痴 not your fault.
I know you tried to save me.
The car just wouldn稚 halt.
I know this loss will hurt you,
But please promise me this:
I want you to remember
The times when we would kiss.

I want you to remember
The girl the pictures show,
And please try to remember
The woman that you know.
Remember this, Forever,
I知 watching from above.
Remember me, Forever.
Remember I知 your love.
©2005-2009 ~deadlypoison695
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Author's Comments

I was simply in the mood to write tonight, and I know I'll forget to post it later. This is my (early) 5,000 hit poem. Wasn't truely planning on writing it so spontainiously, but a mood is a mood eh?

Truely not one of my best works, but kindof a step off into the experimental branch of -shiver- romantic. Probably one of the only "romance" poems I written in a while... and this one really isn't violent (that much). GO ME!

Going to see if my sister can make me a pretty preview for it, but we'll see how it goes.

Hope you enjoy, not my best, but I almost cried re-reading it, so it's gotta be worth something. Either that or it's just me being moody, but whatever, I still like it.

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:iconragdoll26:
o...m....f...g. :+fav:
it is so well organized and...and...AWESOME!

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My dreams are in your eyes.
:icondeadlypoison695:
YAY! :boogie: That's what I love to hear on my first comment ^^ Glad you liked it!

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
:iconmidnite-angel:
ahh i almost cried too.... :cries:

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Why Can't You See That I Try, When Every Tear I Shed, Is For You?

~Midnite-Angel~

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:iconshadowofeternity:
holy crap....i am not worthy :worship: :worship:

seirously, that is a great poem. I LOVE how your organized it..it makes the unity of the poem so...perfect. aiya..im totally :+fav: this...
:iconfroszen-fox:
wow.. this is.. realy good,
truely touching..

and experaments are sometimes good to make
.. even if they be in romance

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ya know u wana
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:icongemini86:
wow, you're really pouring your heart out on this one :hug: I luff youuu!

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Quote of the week:

A word is just a word until someone puts meaning into it~
:icondream-artist:
wow O_o I like this so much (again), I love the story that's behind it, and like others said you organized it so good :D me +fav :)

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"Then I had my dreams and now I'm filled with emptiness,
but wasn't I filled with emptiness, all along?"
:icondeadlypoison695:
Wewt! I'm not the only person crying ^^;

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
:icondeadlypoison695:
Glad you liked it ^^

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:
:icondeadlypoison695:
Glad to hear it, lol

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:blackrose:
Can't you see that sometimes I need to be bothered? That sometimes I push you away, hoping that you'll care enough to come back and try again?
:blackrose:

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