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Dreaming Nightmares by ~deadlypoison695:icondeadlypoison695:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed




Choking on my shapeless thoughts
Fading in my formless dreams
Lying in my doomed reflection
Finding nothing as it seems.

Drowning in the bloody battle
Falling to a faithless place
Running into open arms
Weeping for a fallen grace.

Dying for a taste of life
Watching angels die for love
Fighting those that hold me down
Gasping for the air above.

Failing those I loved the most
Hoping for a second chance
Vanishing into the darkness
Disappearing at a glance.

Ending things that fate began
Mourning those that left me
Crying in my restless sleep
Wanting things that can not be.

Waking in this mortal realm
Seeing past this hopeless lie
Dreaming precious memories
Wishing they would never die.
©2004-2009 ~deadlypoison695
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Author's Comments

This isn't really an 'old poem'. It was a work in progress that I found and took a little while (since I was bored of my ass!) to finish. I think it came out ok, but I dunno.

EDIT: New preview by my lovely sister

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~rosefairy443 Jul 23, 2004, 9:09:55 PM
really really good mdear. keep up the AMAZING work.

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~*~Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear~*~

"It's a good thing most people bleed on the inside or this would really be a gory, blood-smeared earth"
~Go Ask Alice

DAMN THE MAN! SAVE THE EMPIRE!
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~Grimekot Jul 23, 2004, 9:46:04 PM
I agree. You're wonderful with words.
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~urbanedame Jul 23, 2004, 10:19:22 PM
well done.

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"Others have excuses. I have my reasons why." -Nickel Creek
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~HopeAbandoned Jul 23, 2004, 10:31:23 PM
beautiful! very well written.

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--Hope dangles on a string, like slow spinning redemption...winding in and winding out, the shine of which has caught my eye.
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~degothicangel Jul 23, 2004, 10:32:29 PM
really really nicely embedded sweety.
But you see you need to work more on the story , and I know you can do better . Ive seen.

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~SolomHeybrook Jul 23, 2004, 10:36:43 PM
* poitns above* all of those but the last... :-D nicely done... and for a '' come back'' so to speak.. IE coming back to work on a poem.. it turned out very well :hug:

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Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal has ever dreamed before

You gotta love EA Poe :gallery:
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~aviance Jul 24, 2004, 1:39:26 AM
yay!so happy your back writing amazingly awesome poems!well done!the words in this really mean something.they dont llook like theyve just been flung together for the sake of rhyme like most peoples work does.*coughs*(yes i admit mine occasionally too :P)anyway.bravo!

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I'll wait until ive conquered this dreadfull planet...
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~blackrose762 Jul 24, 2004, 1:49:52 AM
beautifully written!! :) well done!

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~kiyahluv13 Jul 24, 2004, 2:57:49 AM
:clap: ur poems are always written so beautiful.good job.i lik dis one

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~jerzchick16 Jul 24, 2004, 7:25:40 AM
fantastic poem lauren. it came out great!

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

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